I do not feel as if this explores enough of your project, and at times does not feel as if it has been taken seriously. There are a couple of moments where you do address questions appropriately however.
You are also lacking a commentary which is essential! Corey
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I do not feel as if this explores enough of your project, and at times does not feel as if it has been taken seriously. There are a couple of moments where you do address questions appropriately however.
You are also lacking a commentary which is essential! Corey
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